Are those the fine guitar stylings of Adam Wisneski as well? Wish it was cut down a bit though. Think it would be stronger if it were half the length. I couldn’t finish it and after about 3 minutes I knew what was coming. Surprises are key to this–keeps us interested. Also, you could tell some people took it seriously and others didn’t. Cut out the ones who didn’t and it will give extra weight to the ones who have a palpable presence in front of the camera. Also the “characters” repeated a lot. Each person is a kind of “everyman/woman” for a type of character and you don’t need any twice (in my opinion). As soon as we say to yourself, “well I saw that (kind of) guy/girl before” you start to lose us. Good work though. Really like it. Way to get yourself in there too. You should do a series like this, but all of you dressed up like different people. Blog looks rad too. Well done.
I think i’ve seen this somewhere beforeā¦but it’s not bad at all
Nice job on the video Adam.
I really like this.
Are those the fine guitar stylings of Adam Wisneski as well? Wish it was cut down a bit though. Think it would be stronger if it were half the length. I couldn’t finish it and after about 3 minutes I knew what was coming. Surprises are key to this–keeps us interested. Also, you could tell some people took it seriously and others didn’t. Cut out the ones who didn’t and it will give extra weight to the ones who have a palpable presence in front of the camera. Also the “characters” repeated a lot. Each person is a kind of “everyman/woman” for a type of character and you don’t need any twice (in my opinion). As soon as we say to yourself, “well I saw that (kind of) guy/girl before” you start to lose us. Good work though. Really like it. Way to get yourself in there too. You should do a series like this, but all of you dressed up like different people. Blog looks rad too. Well done.